#3

Our chemicals
combined
re-arranged
we became eternal
and bright
fading out never
even in sleep

I can't get my mind off you
I am stuck bewildered by the scent you left
Oh the scar you've drawn
on my skin...


This taste
blending
enticing
at the tip of my tongue
A memory
my sanity
all that's left off me

Cover me with your kisses
Wrap me in your arms
Oh this hunger for your essence
unsatiable...

-K-

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  1. your poem is cute,
    sweet sentiment...
    very well expressed.

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  2. Happy Rally.
    I value your support.
    cheers.
    xx

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  3. We became eternal.. what a lovely thought... I liked it. The ending was beautiful too...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  4. 'Unsatiable' describes all. :) Good thought there.

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  5. A nicely done piece - love the imagery of the senses that you generate.

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  6. lovely poem dear :)

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  7. Really cool poem! Intense images worked really well!

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  8. This speaks to the romantic in me. I know what it's like to be unable to get my mind off someone.

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  9. Some lovely images here. I understand the feelings:
    http://shawnbird.com/2010/11/06/old-love/ is my rally entry this week.
    Shawn

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  10. loved the reference to chemicals mixing and the imagery was great, brought it down to the very small to express the very large. well done!

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  11. Hello, how are you?
    Reminder;
    return favors to poets who are here for you,
    do 18 NEW comments….
    let me know after you are done.
    Thanks for the attention!
    Happy Saturday! xxx

    here is mine:
    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html

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  12. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/09/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-participation-awards/

    award notice,
    Happy Wednesday!
    Link a poem to Jingle Poetry potluck if you can, I value your support!
    xxx

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