In my head there's a background score for this
What if I tell you
"yeah, I do miss you"
what are you gon' do about it?
When we ended like
nothing ever really started
Tell me what is on your mind.
Comfortable
like ice cream rolls
melting at the palm of my hands.
Believable
like stars that glow
against the tide of time...
You and I
We're bad living sep'rate lives.
-K-
"yeah, I do miss you"
what are you gon' do about it?
When we ended like
nothing ever really started
Tell me what is on your mind.
Comfortable
like ice cream rolls
melting at the palm of my hands.
Believable
like stars that glow
against the tide of time...
You and I
We're bad living sep'rate lives.
-K-
thanks for sharing xxxx
ReplyDeleteyou write a poem,
ReplyDeletecool!
Dear Kumiko
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this very well. Its beautifully poignant and sad.. I think you have achieved with this what you wanted to convey.. the frustration of being apart...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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well yea! nice poem..
ReplyDeleteended like it never started.... had me going on a tune of my own...
ReplyDeleteCheers!!!
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This is sad--my heart breaks for you.
ReplyDelete"You and I
ReplyDeleteWe're bad living sep'rate lives"
Although I don't think you were talking about long distance love, the last two lines of your poem reminded me of my situation. I'm in a long distance relationship, and my fiancé and I have said the same thing to each other, although worded differently. I love it when I get to read something I can relate to. Thanks!
Greetings!
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End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community
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At this magical time of the year, we wish you all the BEST! U Rock!
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Very well expressed Dear.. Wonderfully written..
ReplyDeleteWishing you a beautiful 2011
Hugs xox
It has been a while, hope that you have a promising and fulfilling 2011 ahead.
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our theme this week is: "the road ahead", but you are welcome to share old poems or poems unrelated to our theme..
The more you share, the happier we are...
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